Wicked_Pistil ([info]wicked_pistil) wrote in [info]fma_yaoi,
Title: Trace Elements

Pairing: Roy/Ed

Rating: PG-13

Theme: #1


Roy wasn’t sure exactly when he had noticed that Edward used his tongue very little during sex, but the boy was most certainly all teeth. While Roy found that he enjoyed little more that pulling the younger man’s supple flesh between his lips and suckling at it, Edward preferred bites, nips, and leaving marks that were hard to explain in the morning.

Edward wasn’t sure exactly when he had noticed that Roy was averse to having the light off when they made love, but the man most certainly preferred the dark. Edward speculated, though never out loud, that it had something to do with the eyepatch and the void it hid behind its stiff black curve. He didn’t like the dark; he liked to see Roy’s face as he reached his climax. He liked to see the muscles in Roy’s shoulders shift and tense when he tipped his hips a certain way.

They hadn’t been together long; six months or seven months or maybe it was six months and twenty-four days, not that Edward kept count. But they were learning these small things about each other, things that no one else knew, things that made them lovers.

Their relationship was a bit of a running joke amongst their few friends “in the know.” They would laugh at how two people with such dominant, stubborn personalities could not only coexist, but be doing it in a way that made them both very content. But Roy and Edward knew better than to base their compatibility off the people they were when they were dealing with mundane things like work.

Edward knew that, when it came down to it, no one could stimulate his mind quite like Roy could. They had spent many nights sitting with their legs drawn up beneath them, facing each other on the couch and arguing with hand gestures and diagrams about the finer points of array development and theory. In turn, Roy knew that there was no one he would welcome more into his home. He enjoyed how they worked together when they weren’t competing like they did at their jobs. Roy knew that something as simple as cooking dinner became as thrilling as alchemy itself when he shared the experience with Edward. He enjoyed the passionate, intellectual debates over the exact definition of “a dash” and what constituted a “simmer.”

As much as they enjoyed flexing their academic muscles for each other, they enjoyed learning from each other more. Through each other, they were relearning friendship and love and vulnerability.

Roy would never ask Edward to stop biting at his flesh so hard and Edward would never ask Roy to please keep the lights on, just this once. They would never ask those things of each other because it was those small things, those trace elements, that made them who they were and made them fit together so amazingly, inexplicably well.


crossposted to [info]fma_yaoi, [info]50_reactions, [info]wicked_pistil.

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[info]strawberrykaoru

September 28 2005, 12:36:16 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, oh, ooooh! ^__^ That's so nice, short and sweet, having defined their relationship so well. The small things really do have a bigger role, heh.

Great piece! =)

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 01:00:29 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you! Your reviews are always so sweet. *hugs*

[info]ozit

September 28 2005, 14:09:46 UTC 6 years ago

I loved it :)

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 01:02:17 UTC 6 years ago

Yay! Thank you so much!

[info]devils_devotion

September 28 2005, 14:11:56 UTC 6 years ago

^^;; You keep kicking my ass with your awesome introspective writing...I hadn't realized how much I love reading about this pair in introspect than in anything else.

Man, you're good. ^____^ *beaming smile!*

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 01:06:29 UTC 6 years ago

*SQUEE!* Thank you so much! I do have to agree though - my favorite RoyEd fics are introspective and/or bad!sex. *nods* That's the good stuff right there.

[info]astizya

September 28 2005, 18:37:16 UTC 6 years ago

Nice. *sniggers* Ed probably would be all about the teeth, wouldn't he?

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 01:10:17 UTC 6 years ago

Thanks! Ed does seem like a biter, doesn't he?

[info]allherglory

September 28 2005, 19:15:35 UTC 6 years ago

But they were learning these small things about each other, things that no one else knew, things that made them lovers.

That was.. wow. Beautifully said. [=

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 01:15:59 UTC 6 years ago

Aw, thank you! *blushes* That was my favorite line. I'm so happy you liked it!

[info]sky_dark

September 28 2005, 22:16:49 UTC 6 years ago

Lovely! So very nice and homey and *le sigh*, makes me melt =)

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 01:27:49 UTC 6 years ago

Aw, I made you melt! It is simply revenge for the many times your sexy, whipped, Pirate Roy has made me melt. Thanks so much (for the melting and the comment!). Glad you liked it!

[info]qem_chibati

September 28 2005, 23:04:56 UTC 6 years ago

Roy would never ask Edward to stop biting at his flesh so hard and Edward would never ask Roy to please keep the lights on, just this once. They would never ask those things of each other because it was those small things, those trace elements, that made them who they were and made them fit together so amazingly, inexplicably well.

That line was just brilliant, it sumemd the fic up so well.

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 01:28:53 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you! I have trouble with conclusions, so I'm really happy you liked it! *hugs*

[info]_edward_elric_

September 29 2005, 02:22:55 UTC 6 years ago

Fantastic. Simply FANTASTIC. Wicked. You've outdone yourself, yet AGAIN. :D I must say, you're impeccable ability to captivate the sheer passionate side and emotional perspective of these two characters just continues to floor me. As I've seen with a few other fics, when trying to remain canon, its best to keep the personalities within retrospect of how they originally are within the boundaries of their IC realms. And never once have you strayed from that. You continue to delve deep into their meaning, and yet, remain as they have always been portrayed. Something not a lot of writes can do. You've masted this type of potrayal quite well. And I must say. You've not stopped ceasing to amaze me.

Keep it up! You're doing exceptional! :D

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 03:22:17 UTC 6 years ago

You darn near make me weepy! Thank you so much for your sweet reviews. *glomp* *looks at short fic* I'm not sure where you get all that from this little piece but I am infinitely flattered that you did. I am seriously touched. Now I shall walk around with a big head for the rest of the week. Thank you so so much!

May I friend you?

[info]_edward_elric_

September 29 2005, 03:34:07 UTC 6 years ago

Awww. But you deserve the praise. Because your work nearly floors me every time. :D I always award credit where credit is due. And yours by far exceeds the expectations of the most modest of writers. When someone puts that much feeling and effort into their work, they deserve to be noticed. <33

And yes. You may friend me. I'd like to confer more. x)

[info]fma_addict1

September 29 2005, 06:33:36 UTC 6 years ago

Aww, that was great. I got the feeling that while the start of their relationship may have been physical, now that they are spending more time together they are really appreciating the little things that make them who they are. I loved it! <3 There's not enough drabbles that are introspective in that way. And not nearly as beautifully-written as this one is. <33

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 10:55:05 UTC 6 years ago

*sniffles* That's really sweet, thank you! I did really want to get across that what they have was definitely developing into a happy relationship that went beyond the physical. I'm really glad it worked!

[info]mistr3ssquickly

September 29 2005, 08:45:09 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, darlin' you made me *cry* with this one. YES, absolutely, that is love. YES. Because David may not like being vegetarian for me, and I certainly don't like using airconditioning instead of open windows for him, but we do it anyway, because that's love, and you make compromises where you can.

Such a gorgeous, accurate capture of love. I read this (am reading this) at 4:55 am, and I'm sitting in bed blubbering like a baby. You have a perfect story here. PERFECT. And i'm madly in love with it. *hugs you*

[info]wicked_pistil

September 29 2005, 11:04:22 UTC 6 years ago

No, don't cry! I can't make the Mistress cry!
But, yes, that is love. Compromises are absolutely necessary (the whole 'bend before breaking' thing).
I am so, so happy you liked this. *passes box of tissues* *hugs you back*

[info]asidian

September 30 2005, 02:27:52 UTC 6 years ago

This line just about makes the fic for me: 'the passionate, intellectual debates over the exact definition of “a dash” and what constituted a “simmer.”' Not that the rest of it wasn't wonderful, but I could just see see them doing that so clearly. :D

[info]wicked_pistil

September 30 2005, 02:32:56 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you! I am so glad you liked it and that the line worked and didn't seem too cliche. If anyone could turn cooking into intellectual, passionate debates, it would indeed be Roy and Ed.

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[info]wicked_pistil

October 1 2005, 00:47:28 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you so much! I don't know if my writing has ever been called "exquisite" before. *blush* I'm really happy you liked it!
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